Crazier and Hazier

This is My very first poem ever written so please do forgive the lack of structure and talent:

Life is getting crazier and hazier. We've got people sitting in their so-called havens talking to ravens obsessing over death while taking their last breath. Tormentors Flocking constantly mocking. The whole hearted fighting the cold hearted wishing there was no war. Darkness flowing over the plains followed by the acid rains. Hollywoods' fame going down in flames as shockwaves rock the worlds docks. Perpetual darkness bringing gloom and doom to the people whose fear rises causing them to despise one another. Eyes peer from the shadows slowly devouring their mind making them search when there is nothing to find. With kindness eliminated nothing left to feel but fear and hatred.

Theres a Poe reference in the second line for those of you who dont notice. to this day he is still my greatest teacher in the world of writing right next to the Infamous Bagby-san my favorite english teacher in my life. Theres another poem just like this which i will post next